Lauryn's amazing blog
Monday 27 August 2012
My color poem
I see a beautiful pink flower on a plant.
I see the soft green grass touching my feet as i play.
I see the wonderful yellow sunset rising up in the morning.
I see a red ruby shining from the light in a glasscase.
Sunday 26 August 2012
Positive Comments !
Hello..
Today i am going to tell you what makes a good comment
A good comment means you have to use
1.punctuation
2.High level vocabulary
3.Correct spelling
4.Add imformation
5.Ask a question
6.Don't repeat yourself
I hope you follow some of these great tips..
Thankyou…...
Sunday 12 August 2012
A little bit about me!!!!!
Hello my name is Lauryn
and i am going to tell you a little bit about myself.
I am a nine year old girl who loves to sing.I like making chocolate chip brownies.
I live in Rotorua.And my brothers name is Jean.
Tuesday 24 July 2012
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